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Chibi Monica

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Monica in the snow.
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This is my first time critiquing someone's work so don't get too mad ok?
I like how you made the snow around Monica like that, but you there was no difference between the ground and sky.
The face and body are great, so that's nothing to fix.
The hair is all spiky and not straight.(forgive me if the hair was never intended to be straight) In addition, you only show the hair on the left side, which is in the front. Where is hair on the right side of her face?
There's also no wrinkles on the jacket.
The falling snow should not have been placed on her face, it makes it seen like a dozen white freckles.
Sorry if I was a bit harsh, I'm a very judgemental person 
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I apologize if I was too rude...